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And stop distracting me with your shirtless furries.

I am so out of ideas right now.

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Lemme get this straight, this is a very good picture of you reading a book, but I'm quite unsure it's a very great one. I think the foreground has got the correct angle for someone who is leaning on a wall reading and doesn't like to be stared at when he does so. It's just the right view for something like that. The background appears very, very simplistic, but at least the background is just a wall, which I'm okay with that.

About the shading in this picture, the shading you did in this picture is outstanding, but not completely perfect. However, the shading does appear to have a more three-dimensional effect on a two-dimensional picture, which is very good to be exact. I love the dog tags, they look almost like they appear realistic, and the four-point star on the blue one and the black paw print on the pink one, they both fit perfectly, especially the blue one, which resembles a lot like his shirt, which I also like as well. I happen to like the shadow of the character itself, it looks kinda perfect for this angle.

The picture does look outstanding in general, but there is one thing that kinda bothers me. The blue flame on the end of his tail looks too simplistic and poorly drawn. The flame may not be your best effort on it, but it still looks like an okay flame.

As I conclude the critique, I'd say that I will rate it Grade A. Well done!
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Mood: Wow! ~irfan9835 Apr 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This pic is great,
I really like the color and the expression on his face.
reminds me of my friend , Matt

the way you use blue as your line is great...
keep it up ^w^
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~pinl101 Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
IDEA: For a crazy side, I give you Matryoshka! X3 Sorry if you find this too annoying.
Vid: [link]
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